Thus far something can be corrected, she would want to obtain councils and criticism.

Hi Marina, nice work. You can use more color or shade transition between the highlight and shadow on tunic to create more appealing look and depth..... Similar to your flesh, you use more shades... Apply this to the uniform it will be stunning. Happy modeling
Allan

Beautiful job on a figure that oozes character.

Colin

Actually this is very good!.. However I do agree with 'Yong', ... blend out those harsh lines on the shading! as they are quite stark. .. e.g. the bottom left leg!.. a very stark contrast of colour! little blending!.. The face I really like, well done.

Regards,

Mark

Beautiful!!
Love the face

Nice work already as it is
Best