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Tears of the sun BW

Discussion in 'Brutal Honesty - Critique Center' started by robert110, Dec 24, 2016.

  1. robert110 Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Croatia
    I'm moving this one to separate thread. Head is almost completed and I have started with body for this bust. Not quite satisfied how it looks , needs more corrections.. any advice?

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  2. Redcap A Fixture

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    United-Kingdom
    Excellent likeness and I recognised who it was straight away ! Not too sure why you are not happy with it?

    Gary
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  3. robert110 Well-Known Member

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    Croatia
    Thanks Gary .. head is fine for me, but torso is what's bothering me :)
  4. arj A Fixture

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    United-Kingdom
    Excellent head .... immediately recognisable.

    Cheers,
    Andrew
  5. Jeff T A Fixture

    Country:
    Australia
    I'm no sculptor Robert, but that looks great to me!

    Cheer's,
    Jeff.
  6. Wayneb A Fixture

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    United-States
    I think this looks great Robert.......Put more work into the torso until it doesn't bother you.:)

    Wayne
  7. Scotty A Fixture

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    Scotland
    If it's Bruce from the film maybe you've made life a bit hard for yourself. Wouldn't it be easier sculpting his clothes and kit rather than trying to "dress" a mannequin? Excellent likeness by the way, good luck with the rest.
    Scotty.
  8. JasonB Moderator

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    United-States
    I thought I posted previously, but its seems not. Anyhow, I think the head is good, just watch the bulkiness of the torso. You will need to add clothing and equipment, and if you start bulky, it will be hard to correct. Start thin and let the uniform fill out any mass he might lack. Bruce isn't a body builder type, so thinner is better.
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  9. robert110 Well-Known Member

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    Croatia
    Thanks guy's for useful tips ! Keep them coming ...
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  10. robert110 Well-Known Member

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    Croatia
    Test run with uniform ...

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  11. Wayneb A Fixture

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    United-States
    Looks good Robert....You still have to get the anatomy right under the under the clothes or you'll be guessing for a long time......but run with it and see where it goes.....that's how you learn............

    Wayne
  12. Oda A Fixture

    Looks good to me.The likeness is striking and so far the torso seems to be coming along very well too.

    Oda.
  13. robert110 Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Croatia
    Thanks guy's for support and following this effort ! Here's some advance with on harnesses .. fine tuning follows..

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  14. MrBMB A Fixture

    Your doing a great job on this
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  15. robert110 Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Croatia
    Thanks MrBMB , and few new details on New Years day ..
    of course I wish everybody lots of new models in progress , in stash and finished in this year , happy new year guy's !!

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  16. robert110 Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Croatia
    Well , at this point I would like to know what to do next, do you see something to correct or to re-sculpt . Please give me some input !!
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  17. Scotty A Fixture

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    Scotland
    That is excellent work on the webbing but I think it looks like it's just resting on him, it should dig into his shirt with the weight of ammunition, radio, water bottles etc. Very good though, you have a great talent my friend.
    Scotty.
  18. robert110 Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Croatia
    yes, yes , yes, thanks Scotty.. that's input I needed . Sometimes I'm looking at this sculpt and don't see obvious things..
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  19. robert110 Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Croatia
    still fighting with this ... he's really hard to die (go to oven) :)...

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  20. clrsgt A Fixture

    Country:
    United-States
    Great likeness. Not sure why you are dissatisfied.
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