WIP Critique Steiner buste 1/6

Discussion in 'Sculpting' started by Renéduret, Oct 9, 2011.

  1. megroot A Fixture

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    Netherlands
    Perfect.
    Like the way he is coming out.
    Rene, are you gonna sculpt the Iron Cross to???

    Marc
  2. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    No Marc.

    I deliberately took this more common Coburnlook so I can use the torso for other subjects.
    Later on the jacket with the cross can be easily added.

    I just ike to empasize the character of Steiner.
    Dont be afraid, the bust itself will have enough challenge!

    Rene
  3. megroot A Fixture

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    Netherlands
    Yes, he has alot of character and that will be challenge enough, no misunderstanding on that.

    Marc
  4. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    pockets and wrinkles under construction...
  5. BobLff257 A Fixture

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    United-Kingdom
    Really enjoying this thread, seeing Steiner metamorphosise has been enlightening. Hat off to you Reneé

    Rob
  6. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    thank you Rob!

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  7. megroot A Fixture

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    Netherlands
    My brushes shivering when they see this.
    Can't wait.

    marc
  8. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    for an idea:

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    thanks Marc!

    René
  9. megroot A Fixture

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    Netherlands
    Watched the movie yesterday evening just to look at the colors.
    He is allready awesome

    Marc
  10. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    Maybe I will cover up the ears a bit in the end and do some refining of the hair.
    Also notice his dogtag.

    basic things first.
  11. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Did some sketching by pencil, create more depth and trying to locate less perfect spots.

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  12. megroot A Fixture

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    Netherlands
    Did you do the sketching on the real bust or is it photoshop sketching??

    Marc
  13. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    no, just drawing with a real pencil Marc.
    afterwards scanned again.

    His shoulders will be lifted a bit more and his neck smaller as will be the collar.
    Took some pics from myself in some kind of blouse James wears for checking.

    René
  14. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    some corrections.
    Neck, widening torso ( suspenders look more natural now), shoulders more lifted. less collar and different type of wrinkle on the arms.
    The skinny guy Coburn is more significant this way.

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  15. Ferris A Fixture

    This is impressive Rene!
    Good luck with the final stretch.

    Adrian
  16. Jamie Stokes Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Australia
    Much better!

    I do admire your persistence with your projects, it is the mark of a craftsman, striving for best results.

    Having compared the screen grab & the alterations to the neck you propose, I can now see it, too!

    Cheers!

    Jamie
  17. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    best results, sure!

    I have to, remember I dedicated this one to Antonio :awesome:

    who gave me good advice on this one together with Jiver.

    thanks folks!:cool:

    Rene
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  18. ldom77 Member

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    France
    Bonjour René

    J'espère que tu feras des tirages de ce buste !

    Si c'est le cas je t'en prends un direct

    Dominique
  19. Renéduret Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Netherlands
    oui Dominique,

    je vais lui preparer pour tirage et tu peux t' incrire chez moi pour acheter *
    (* there will be a few casts of Steiner which I'm willing to sell when ready)

    Rene
  20. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    I see you improved the neck, it looks much better now (it was too wide), but I think that one more small thing should be fixed, those two strenocleidomastoids (man what a complicated word), should go more diagonal up towards jaw bones, and form a letter "V", in your case it looks more like a letter "U", this shows what I mean:

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    Looking forward to see this painted !!!

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