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Completed Critique Spartan Officer

Discussion in 'vBench (Works in Progress)' started by megroot, Nov 27, 2011.

  1. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    This figure is in my opinion now Completed.
    Like to here some comments, good or bad.
    Pictures are not so good in quality, my photolights went down.
    spartan 001 (Medium).jpg spartan 002 (Medium).jpg spartan 004 (Medium).jpg
    Marc
  2. dimgall Active Member

    Country:
    Greece
    nice reds Marc !!!good job!!.keep up
    Dimitris
  3. Ron Tamburrini A Fixture

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Hi Marc.

    I don't wish to be to critical as it may just be the photos,but there seems to be a lot of paint on this one, and it would appear that you are dragging the colours
    into one another which is muddying things up a bit, sorry to be so obtuse
    but hopefully this is constructive critque. :cautious:

    Ron
  4. pmfs A Fixture

    Country:
    Portugal
    Nice work my friend!!!:)
  5. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    Thanks Ron, you may critical as much as you wish.
    I saw the muddy colors on the pictures to, but you gotta believe me on my wroting words....in reality it isn't.
    I think that it is done by PS when i brought back the contrast. As wrote before, my photolights broke up and i did this with other lights where i'm not so satisfied with.

    Marc
  6. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    Pedro, thank you so much

    marc
  7. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    dim,
    Thanks.
  8. billyturnip A Fixture

    Country:
    England
    A good paint job on a nice sculpt Marc, he looks like a real old campaigner.

    Roger.
  9. Sambaman Well-Known Member

    Country:
    United-States
    Marc, over all I think you've got a great piece here. The reds are nice! I have a couple thoughts, the iris/pupil portion of the eyes look just a tad too large to me. Also, and it may be your photos, but the highlights on the flesh tones look like they could use a tad more blending. Other than that, keep up the good work!

    Jay H.
  10. debrito A Fixture

    Country:
    Canada
    Nice one Marc, great job...(y)
  11. Kisifer Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Greece
    Beautiful work Mark. You really did great on this beauty.

    Xenofon
  12. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    Thanks to all for the input. Reworked the pictures in PS again. Looks much better now, but not 70 %.
    Gonna look again at the eyes.

    Marc
  13. pipetrepid Active Member

    Country:
    United-States
    marc, very nice work as always!
  14. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    thanks William.

    Marc
  15. sarouman A Fixture

    Country:
    Greece
    Hello Marc
    My friend gave this to change your paint job.
    I liked it very much and metal parts are incredibly!!!!:notworthy:

    Alexandros(y)
  16. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    Thanks Alexandros.

    marc
  17. tonydawe A Fixture

    Country:
    Australia
    Hi Marc,

    I'd agree totally with Jay's comments. Keep up the good work mate.
  18. jimias A Fixture

    Country:
    Greece
    Agreed. Bravo Marc.
  19. Chris K New Member

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Hi marc,

    I think its really nice mate I also know its quite a small bust,i like the way you have captured the look of a spartan of more senior years

    Nice one(y)

    Chris
  20. megroot PlanetFigure Supporter

    Country:
    Netherlands
    Tony, Dimitrios and Chris,

    Thanks for looking and taken the time to make a comment.

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