New attempt...rough sketch

still trying ... any help and suggestion would be nice

cheers
Robert

Just a bit more space between eyebrow and eyelid ?

slow progress ...

some progress ...

test run home made pe parts .. few errors during preparation but I've learned something .. next will be better

Good work Robert
Well worth all of the effort.
Keith

Thanks for sharing. Looks great.

Cheers

Huw

Thanks for comments my friends, and here's latest photos ... some more smoothing and I think he is going to oven .... any suggestions before I bake him ?

Thanks Nap, yes base will be ... thinking something like tail of his bf 109 ..

cheers
Robert

The collar. there should be a hole (some empty space) at the lower part visible below the collar - this way it looks too flat at the ends.
For the rest, great work

baked and now one month r&r

I think overall this looks great.....But...maybe for your next one;..I would suggest a different mounting base for your sculpt. Something with a little more radius as there are not too many people with a lower torso that flat across the front. Just a suggestion...Either way...Keep up the good work.....

Wayne

Thanks Wayne , did You think something like that ... cut it on black line or ..?

No.....Take that same approximate radius and look from the top; I know the pockets are there which will add some bulk to the sides...but you have to imagine the human body underneath......Every suggestion helps or at least gets you thinking right or wrong....If you make that cut as shown; it might take away some of the visual aspect of flatness in the front. Personally....If you agree with me ; take it as a lesson learned and move on. Your next one will be better. If you don't agree; just tell me to pound salt and still move on...You're on your way.

Wayne

Aah yes, flat chest , yes You are right... thanks for suggestion.. Well, this one is going on the shelf and after r&r next is going on the workbench ...thanks for watching and comments ... keep them coming please !
cheers
Robert

Back home and back to workbench. Tried to correct what Wayne was suggested ....

Hi Robert,
That looks great......every piece gets better....don't stop there....have fun with it and keep up the good work.

Wayne