Discussion in 'vBench (Works in Progress)' started by Cicero, Dec 26, 2005.
Hey Johan, great job.Well done
A terrific paint job
the figures compliment each other really well
Great to see thanks for posting
Excellent work Johan................really superb vignette
Excellent! Well done.
BEAUTIFUL WORK,Johan !!!! Keep up the good work,my friend. Cheers !
Beautiful little vign Johan. Very nicely done.
I can only chip in with the comments, Johan!
I really like the hair of the spearman.
Johan, Nice job on the vignette.~Gary
I agree with the rest of the comments, good work.
Keep up e good work
Nice painting, beautiful setup see this in "the flesh" at the AMSS contest
Great work. And that bronse looks in real excellent.
I hope to see the vignette at the 10 januari in real.
Stephen, Frank, Guy, Artur Kenneth, Xenofon, Janne, Gary, Roc, Peter and Marc,
Thank you all for your comments. They are much appreciated and extend that christmas feeling!
Good piece. If I may, I would like to point out a few things I observed.
The figure in red looks as if he's "planted" into the ground instead of standing on it.
I see where you were going with the "dirt" coming over the tops of the feet. But the ground dosn't look "disturbed" enough. Also, the feet/ankles look far too clean for men who have been sparing.
The blood looks too"Hollywood" IMO. I feel it would look better if it were in "streams" going in different directions. This would give a "feeling" of movement.
Some patches of dust/dirt on the wound would look cool too. And over the body in spots showing that they may have fallen at some point in the dual.
Veins on the biceps/arms wouldn't hurt either.
The red clothing (sorry, don't know the correct term) looks too shiny. Could be the lighting though.
The armor looks fantastic. No critique there.
I feel these little things was the difference between a silver and gold.
Good luck with your next project.
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