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WIP Critique Mongol Warrior

Discussion in 'vBench (Works in Progress)' started by Andrew Craft, Apr 26, 2011.

  1. Andrew Craft Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Australia
    Another bust started today from Pegaso. I got the face done and started work on the shirt. I have tried to push the shadows and highlights on the face, something I tend to under do.
    All critique is welcome,
    Thanks for looking.

    Andrew.

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  2. megroot A Fixture

    Country:
    Netherlands
    Very nice start Andrew.
    For myself i find the face to dark for a Mongol. But it is possible that the picture don't do justice.
    The shirt is great. Some more highlights on the highest folds, and that will end up with some amazing red.

    marc
  3. Andrew Craft Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Australia
    Thanks Marc, he isn't as dark as this the pictures are very dark.
  4. housecarl Moderator

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Nice silky look to the shirt Andrew.
    Carl.
  5. Andrew Craft Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Australia
    Thanks Carl.
    This might be a better pic.

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  6. jimias A Fixture

    Country:
    Greece
    Face looks good as does the red shirt so far. Some extreme highlights would really bring this up as suggested already.
  7. unknown01 New Member

    Country:
    Japan
    Great start Andrew.
    A facial expression is fantastic.
    I think the tone appropriate for the Mongolian.
    I'd like to follow.

    Mitsutaka.
  8. Whitney Active Member

    Country:
    United-States
    Like it so far, Andrew. Very nice work.
  9. mil-mart A Fixture

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Andrew a great start , following.

    Cheers Ken
  10. Andrew Craft Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Australia
    Thanks very much for looking and the comments.
    Today I tidied up the shirt and got the armour off to a start.

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  11. Andrew Craft Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Australia
    Nearly there with this one. A bit more work to do on the leather on the helmet, some touch ups here and there and I think the cloth on the inside of the helmet is too white so I might have to redo that.
    All comments and critique are welcome.
    Thanks,
    Andrew.

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  12. housecarl Moderator

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    I think if you add more shading to the helmet liner you'll be fine. Lovely job apart from that Andrew.
    Carl.
  13. sam b Well-Known Member

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    cracking skin tone mate !!! well done
    sam
  14. Gellso A Fixture

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Very nicely done

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