Hi Rick,
I think thats some pretty good work, Marines are one of my favorite subjects. Personally I don't like the partial dead guy at all. To me, it looks like a guy has been blown apart and just his upper torso is left, which I know isn't the effect you are going for. I think if the base were just slightly longer, I would go with the charging guys, they look well done. They look a little close on the base as it is, IMHO. The guy with the sword might look a little too upright for being that close to slashing at a guy trying to stick him with a bayonet.Its like he just stopped dead and decided to take a swing, instead of continuing forward with his charge. If he were lunging a bit more I think it would work better. The other two fit the bill perfectly. You could just leave him out and let the guy with the bayonet be preparing for someone thats outside the scope of the scene. This would also give you an odd number of figures, which would make it a little less balanced or "staged" (one Marine for each Japanese) and a little more like a snap shot of the action. I'm looking to get a set of these guys myself, this helps a lot with showing me their quality and what can be done with them.
Sorry if anyone feels this is being too critical or criticizing in any way...
Cheers
Jason
BTW, do you have the Warriors stretcher bearer set that you might be interested in selling??? Missed out on it when it was readily available, and haven't been able to find it anywhere