hi all,
future painting project...

Mahmoud

I like the composition although I feel the figure's arrangement, especially the wounded soldier is too perfectly balanced. Maybe if you angle body of the casualty a little. ~Gary

Gary, Thanks for giving an advise
My idea was to focus the eye towards the flag as described in the following photo.
I think changing the position of the wounded soldier make loose this effect.

Even if you change the angle of the wounded soldier's body and keep his head looking at the soldier with the flag the focus will still be on the flag. Either way nice composition. ~Gary

How about using this as the front and just turn all figures except the wounded a tad bit so they face the viewer?


Cheers
Janne Nilsson

I will reconsider position of the wounded soldier...

Thanks for the comments