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Completed Critique Afgan girl

Discussion in 'vBench (Works in Progress)' started by gylaci, Apr 23, 2012.

  1. gylaci Active Member

    Country:
    Hungary
    Hello Everyone !
    This was my latest work.
    I really like to paint this nice figur.
    I hope you like it.
    Every comments and criticism are welcome.

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    Cheers.

    Laci.
    outrunthedogs, theBaron, pmfs and 2 others like this.
  2. pmfs A Fixture

    Country:
    Portugal
    László, I love your work and I think yours and Pepa´s are the best i´ve seen of this bust until now IMHO.
    Beautiful eyes and smooth transitions of the flesh done with style.
    FOR MY PERSONAL TASTE, I love to see more contrast in the reds.
    Many thanks for sharing sir.

    Pedro.
  3. megroot A Fixture

    Country:
    Netherlands
    Looking good.
    Some remarks if I may. The reds need more shading and highlight. As far as I can see I believe that you highlight with white. I see some pink into the red.
    Also the green needs more contrast, so highlighting more will do.
    The the eyes: In my humble opinion the iris is to round. If you look carefully to another persons eye you never see the underside of the iris round. The iris is mostly a circle flatted on the up and under side.
    Because of that I think the eyes look unnatural. But the color of the iris is perfect.
    Further the lips are to purple. You can overpaint it with a reddish skincolor.

    Marc
  4. housecarl A Fixture

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Very smooth transitions on the face Laci.
    Carl.(y)

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