Completed Critique 54MM-Seil Roman Centurion

Discussion in 'vBench (Works in Progress)' started by Mike Stevens, Nov 25, 2011.

  1. Mike Stevens A Fixture

    Country:
    United-States
    Hi Guys,

    We have a long Holiday here in the states and I had some time to paint. Here's my latest, a Roman, it's a first for me. Painting a face inside of a helmet presented it challenges. I had to strip it 4 or 5 times before i was happy.

    It's painted in acrylics and printers inks. I think I'll try Metal Coate on the next one.

    All comments and critiques welcome.

    Attached Files:

  2. captnenglish Well-Known Member

    Country:
    United-States
    THis is the only Seil Romn I don't own. Nice job on ths one.
  3. Meehan34 A Fixture

    Country:
    United-States
    very nice work my man.
  4. MENTAL DENTAL A Fixture

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Mike, constructive criticism

    The lower eyelid is too dark, it looks like he's got eye-liner on. Use a mid brown or no line on it at all as blokes tend to have negligible eyelashes on the lower lid. You could also just have a darker lower shade to the lower half of the eyeball which will give you the contrast to the highlighted flesh of the lower eyelid. On a 54mm figure you have to think how a person would look about 25m away.

    When I used to judge figures I would put the figure down with no score if the eyes weren't right..............no matter who the artist was!

    Otherwise a fine effort and I'm glad you didn't overdo the red highlights with white making it go pink.

    Hope this helps.:unsure:


    David
  5. Mike Stevens A Fixture

    Country:
    United-States
    Mike, Matthew and David,

    Thanks for taking the time to stop by and take a look at the figure and comment.

    David, I'll take your feedback for what it is. I always like to be able to improve with every figure. I appreciate your candor.

    Thanks
  6. megroot A Fixture

    Country:
    Netherlands
    I like the paintwork on this figure. For me the eyes are to intense blue.

    Marc
  7. MENTAL DENTAL A Fixture

    Country:
    United-Kingdom
    Mike,
    I mean to help.If all you hear are platitudes you'll keep making the same mistakes. I had Adrian Bay as a mentor for years[ or was that tormentor?!]

    I've kept some of my early figures and occasionally I look at them to remind me how I've changed and to think how I could change further.

    Very often it's simple little things that add up to a lot. If I get time I'll get some shots done of a '97 figure and the same one done ~5 years later.

    (y)

    David
  8. Mike Stevens A Fixture

    Country:
    United-States
    Thanks David, I appreciate it.

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