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WIP Critique J.B.Tito

Discussion in 'Sculpting' started by pokrad, Jan 14, 2012.

  1. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    Here is a pic:

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    and here is the start of the head:

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    Rene, Antonio, heeeelp neded o_O

    Attached Files:

  2. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    Like to see this develop Darko. For now, I think he needs more volume under the chin.
    large scale again?

    Rene
  3. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    Yap, 1/6...
  4. antonio argudo Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Spain
    Hi Darko, nice start, the more pics with diferent angles the beter we can help, I suggest a good google image research, I found some sculptures that are usefull, btw: his face reminds me a mix beatwin Goering and Mussolini :lol:
    keep the good!

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  5. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    Hey, Melbourn is online :)

    I told Darko to watch the ressemblance with Goering...:)
  6. Renéduret Well-Known Member

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    Netherlands
    on the other hand...why not start a sculpt of Tito and Hermann together?

    Tito starts to look like Hermann and Hermann like Tito.

    I see no problem.
  7. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    I'll post some pics from different angles as soon as I get overall shape of the face ;)
  8. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    Still rough, but here are two quick ones:

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  9. antonio argudo Well-Known Member

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    Spain
    Hi darko,
    I would recomend you to set the head in little more inclinate and fixed position so volumes wont trick you more easily, I think in the bronze sculture picture has a very good one angle to work with.

    I did some quick sketch comparing volumes, I think yours needs volumen on the top forehead and you can take away volume on the back cranium, the jaw line doesnt end too backwards, also check the neck position and chin wich needs to move forward, hope this help, keep the good mate!:cool:
    Antonio

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  10. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    Good point, I had the feeling that there is too much volume on the back...
  11. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    Few corrections (thx Antonio - I need to check if the neck is enough moved forward):

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    Now I'll try to find main errors using PS...
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  12. Renéduret Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Netherlands
    PS is great! drop some meat on back of head.thinner neck.
  13. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    Agree, the back is not yet trimmed enough...
  14. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    Think that rough volumes are in place, now I'll try refine a bit(especially eyes and nose), and see where it goes:


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    Crits are welcome !
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  15. Renéduret Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Netherlands
    I think it looks good. Try to fit the fez for a while and see what happens.
    Think the back of the haed is too much and consequently the neck.
    Place some temperarely ears, like little balls ..you will see.

    polish king...:)

    René
  16. antonio argudo Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Spain
    I agree with Rene Amigo, too much volume on the back, also you should soften the jaw line and they get too backwards, the neck is sorter and jelly, the adam apple is too low position, keep the good Darko!

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  17. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    What we have here is a new technology called "Remote sculpting" :)
    Thx, guys I'll try to follow the instructions as close as I can !!!
  18. Renéduret Well-Known Member

    Country:
    Netherlands
    I also see a deep respect for each others arts Darko.

    I like your technique on the eyelid and mouth.
    I always love the efforts of Antonio and intervention of other good sculptors, make you want to strive for the best!

    I believe you were a bit blinded by the mass Tito's head seemed to have.

    succes!

    René
  19. pokrad A Fixture

    Country:
    Croatia
    You are right, when you look at something too long, you do not see anything ;)

    Here is a quick "mockup" to see if it fits:

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    Shortened the neck, moved the jawline, reduced the back of the head...
    crf likes this.
  20. Christosjager A Fixture

    Country:
    Greece
    Getting better and better, very nice progress so far, following.

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